2016哈六中一模英语试题及答案(5)

第四部分 写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
    假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
    删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
          2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jim,
I am so exciting that you will come to China. I will free from December 18 and will have a plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you can take No. 8 Bus for my home. You worry about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it in your city. It isn’t very cold, but you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly fun together.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
  Yours,
  John

第二节  书面表达（满分25分）
现在越来越多的人成为“低头族”（phubbing）. 请你针对这一现象写一篇演讲稿。要点如下：
1. 描述低头族现象
2. 发表你的看法
3. 提出倡议
注意： 1．词数100左右。
       2. 适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
英语
答案：1-20： ACCBC   AABCB   CBACB   AACBA
      21-24：BCAC   25-28：DDBC   29-32：BDAD   33-35： DAB
  36-40: CAFGD  
41-60：CABAD   ACABB  CDDCA  BCDDB

61. with  62. who/that  63. Thinking  64. because/as/since 65. to help
66 began  67. response  68. An  69. desperately  70. Brighter

Dear Jim,
I am so exciting(excited) that you will come to China. I will (加be) free from December 18 and will have a(去掉) plenty of time to be together with you. I’ll meet you at the airport and then you（we） can take No. 8 Bus for(to) my home. You worry(worried) about the weather here in your email. In fact, the weather here is quite different from it(that) in your city. It isn’t very cold, but(so/and) you needn’t bring many clothes with you. During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of interests (interest)and you can taste some local snacks. I am sure we will have greatly(great) fun together.
I’m looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
John